• FAQ  • Search  • Memberlist  • Usergroups   • Register   • Profile  • Log in to check your private messages  • Log in 

I need some help finishing my new book



 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    trumpetherald.com Forum Index -> Fundamentals
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
John Holifield
Veteran Member


Joined: 17 Oct 2008
Posts: 291

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 6:04 am    Post subject: I need some help finishing my new book Reply with quote

Would anyone be willing to help me do the final edit of my new book? I'm pretty much done with all the ideas, instructions and references, but I'm having trouble with some articulation, formatting, punctuation and various other things. I'm not a writer per se, I'm more of a teacher and this is where I need help. Would anyone be interested?

John
_________________
Working hard is great. But, it is more productive and rewarding to Work Smart!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
kehaulani
Heavyweight Member


Joined: 23 Mar 2003
Posts: 9032
Location: Hawai`i - Texas

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 6:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Are you talking about for a fee or gratis?
_________________
"If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn." Bird

Yamaha 8310Z Bobby Shew trumpet
Benge 3X Trumpet
Benge 3X Cornet
Adams F-1 Flghn
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
John Holifield
Veteran Member


Joined: 17 Oct 2008
Posts: 291

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 6:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Another problem I'm having is that my previous book, which I self published, is being advertised worldwide and has sold hundreds of copies but I've not been paid. While I'm not happy about it, I'm glad that my material is being used
_________________
Working hard is great. But, it is more productive and rewarding to Work Smart!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
John Holifield
Veteran Member


Joined: 17 Oct 2008
Posts: 291

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 6:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

kehaulani wrote:
Are you talking about for a fee or gratis?


I would be willing to pay for services rendered
_________________
Working hard is great. But, it is more productive and rewarding to Work Smart!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
stuartissimo
Heavyweight Member


Joined: 17 Dec 2021
Posts: 990
Location: Europe

PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 8:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Have you considered doing something like sending the text to ChatGPT and have the AI take a crack at fixing it? If anything it might be faster…
_________________
1975 Olds Recording trumpet
1997 Getzen 700SP trumpet
1955 Olds Super cornet
1939 Buescher 280 flugelhorn
AR Resonance mouthpieces
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
John Holifield
Veteran Member


Joined: 17 Oct 2008
Posts: 291

PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2023 7:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

stuartissimo wrote:
Have you considered doing something like sending the text to ChatGPT and have the AI take a crack at fixing it? If anything it might be faster…


While ChatGPT is ok with individual paragraphs, It has no Idea of the scope of my work. This is why I reached out for help as I needed a person who has knowledge of the work I'm trying to accomplish. I appreciate your suggestion!

John
_________________
Working hard is great. But, it is more productive and rewarding to Work Smart!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
ProAm
Heavyweight Member


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
Posts: 949

PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2023 8:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting. How many pages is your book? What kind of a book? Mostly words or mostly exercises?

Are you just asking for editing help on punctuation and wording? You mentioned formatting - what are you using to create your book? 30 years ago I had some knowledge of Framemaker, an extensive program for creating complex documents. Our company had a number of people whose expertise was in document creation with Framemaker. Some formatting programs can require quite a bit of knowledge in order to use them effectively. I may have created the text for a section but another person took it and knew how to insert that text into the larger whole.

Though I am not a professional writer, I think that I have a decent command of the written, English language. My punctuation tends toward an older style using more commas than is popular today. I have written papers using appropriate style books for guidance.

But if you are trying to format text around musical examples, that is something different. I have a friend who has written mathematical textbooks and the tools he uses to insert equations, diagrams, etc. took him a lot of effort and years to develop.

My question summed up is: what kind of help are you asking for, exactly?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
OldSchoolEuph
Heavyweight Member


Joined: 07 Apr 2012
Posts: 2441

PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2023 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

John Holifield wrote:
It has no Idea of the scope of my work. This is why I reached out for help as I needed a person who has knowledge of the work I'm trying to accomplish.



We're kinda in the dark too. What exactly is the subject, and the help requested?
_________________
Ron Berndt
www.trumpet-history.com

2017 Austin Winds Stage 466
1962 Mt. Vernon Bach 43
1954 Holton 49 Stratodyne
1927 Conn 22B
1957 Holton 27 cornet
1985 Yamaha YEP-621
1975 Yamaha YEP-321 Custom
1965 Besson Baritone
1975 Olds Recording R-20
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
JayKosta
Heavyweight Member


Joined: 24 Dec 2018
Posts: 3308
Location: Endwell NY USA

PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2023 11:21 am    Post subject: Re: I need some help finishing my new book Reply with quote

John Holifield wrote:
... I'm pretty much done with all the ideas, instructions and references, but I'm having trouble with some articulation, formatting, punctuation and various other things. ...

---------------------
What text editor did you use to construct the written material, and the illustrations for the book?
Do you have some sort of 'draft copy' of the book? If not, how is your material organized - separate files, images, etc.

You mention 'articulation' - are you referring to 'tonguing stuff', or how to articulate your ideas into good written language.
_________________
Most Important Note ? - the next one !
KNOW (see) what the next note is BEFORE you have to play it.
PLAY the next note 'on time' and 'in rhythm'.
Oh ya, watch the conductor - they set what is 'on time'.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Arranger-Transcriber
Veteran Member


Joined: 01 Mar 2003
Posts: 355
Location: Maryland, USA

PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2023 11:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think many us us are still in the dark about your subject matter, the types of editing problems you anticipate, and the scope of your project. Might I suggest that you set aside a couple brief examples of the material you're writing about and offer to send them to those who are interested so that they might gain a more concrete idea of the task involved. Possibly you could offer a larger portion of your previous publication as well. I myself have 40 years of experience as a teacher of writing and as a technical editor. One thing I would caution against is engaging a committee of people for the job. For conistency and control, you need ONE individual.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
John Holifield
Veteran Member


Joined: 17 Oct 2008
Posts: 291

PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2024 9:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Update: I've had a couple members respond to my plea for help, of which I'm very grateful! Not only did I, with their help, finish and publish my new book, but I was able to finish writing and completed my next book and publish it also. I really appreciate everyone's advice, I read everyone's comments, but I took the advice and help from the members who reached out to me.

John
_________________
Working hard is great. But, it is more productive and rewarding to Work Smart!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    trumpetherald.com Forum Index -> Fundamentals All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group